hi this is my story i did in my free time! please-
comment or like. Thank you ♡
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss H. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
hello Naomi i'm Riley from south Hornby school.i like the part when you used the word BOOM it scared me A bit.i was interested because it had chapters and i like to read.have you thought about using more wow words.what happend to Mr starde?. cant wait for you to reply,Riley
ReplyDeletethank you Riley ill be working on some new chapters. Ill share it to you so we can both work on it.
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